Radio Play Outline, ep. 1
I Establishing Scene-
Justin
- Bicycle lunch delivery through a busy downtown (Louisville, KY)
- Sounds of a bicycle, sounds of traffic
- Interior monologue (improv or scripted, glimpses of personality)
- Delivery complete (very short interaction with customer, could also involve elevator noises, more interior monologue, etc.)
- Phone call to Max
II Establishing Scene-
Max
- "Hey, I'm at work." "Yeah, me too." We still meeting up later?" "Hell yeah." "Cool. Gotta go." "Cool, peace." (etc.; improv or scripted)
- Short interaction with customer (buying a book)
- Sounds of cash register (receipt tearing, drawer closing, clatter of change)
- Interior monologue (improv or scripted, glimpses of personality)
- Writes e-mail to Chloe, sounds of typing, content of e-mail as interior monologue), switches to:
III Establishing Scene-
Chloe
- Reading Max's e-mail as interior monologue (fades into overlap with Max's words, Max's words fade-out
- E-mail is invitation to hang out before spoken word event the three (she, Justin and Max) are going to
- Chloe interrupted by co-worker
- "So and so is here to see you." Chloe begins speaking to incoming student about applying for student loans, fades out to
IV
Justin and Max
- Riding bikes together through park (sounds of bikes, maybe some cool tunes laid over it)
- Justin and Max pull off the trail and lock their bikes up, walk over to the Creek (Beargrass)
- Sounds of running water, birds, etc.
- Justin and Max smoke a joint (could be implied), relaxed conversation, venting about work/relationship bullshit, maybe Max and/or Justin and Chloe have a love-hate thing going on, audience gets their honest opinion of her (improv or scripted)
- Justin notices something weird in the water, some kind of rusty, red run-off flowing through it
- Max makes cynical remarks about a dying planet, corporations taking a dump in the creek, etc.
- Justin takes video on his phone, narrates over top of it
V
Chloe, Justin and Max
- Busy coffee shop or bar/lounge (sounds of background conversation, clank of dishes, etc.)
- Conversation between the three about the weird run-off found in the creek
- Justin shows Chloe the video
- The three crack-wise about what it could be, Justin vows to upload it to Youtube
- M.C. announces the beginning of the poetry jam, calls Chloe up for the open mic
- Chloe goes up and reads a poem (original written for/by her)
- As she finishes, the M.C. goes up to thank her ask for another round of applause, etc., fades out to
VI
Justin on Youtube
- Justin's narration from earlier scene filming creek cuts out, Justin speaks directly into webcam
VII
Justin and Max
- Justin meets up with Max at coffee shop. Max on his laptop.
- Justin asks Max to pull up Youtube video.
- Max does, only static comes up
- Video removed "Violating terms of service? What the fuck (or bleep, may be funnier for effect)?"
- Justin tries to pull up video on phone, sees it's been deleted
- Max laughs, teases him gently (witty banter ensues, etc.--scripted or improv)
- Justin convinces Max to go back out to the creek with him, take footage of his own phone, put it on Youtube to see what happens
VIII
Outro
- Justin and Max go to the creek
- Contaminated area of creek blocked off, signs posted say "private property, construction", etc.
- Obvious cliff-hanger is obvious
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