Friday, February 14, 2014

Radio Play Outline, ep. 1

I  Establishing Scene-Justin
  • Bicycle lunch delivery through a busy downtown (Louisville, KY)
  • Sounds of a bicycle, sounds of traffic
  • Interior monologue (improv or scripted, glimpses of personality)    
  • Delivery complete (very short interaction with customer, could also involve elevator noises, more interior monologue, etc.)
  • Phone call to Max
II  Establishing Scene-Max
  • "Hey, I'm at work."  "Yeah, me too."  We still meeting up later?"  "Hell yeah."  "Cool. Gotta go."  "Cool, peace."  (etc.; improv or scripted)
  • Short interaction with customer (buying a book)
  • Sounds of cash register (receipt tearing, drawer closing, clatter of change)
  • Interior monologue (improv or scripted, glimpses of personality)
  • Writes e-mail to Chloe, sounds of typing, content of e-mail as interior monologue), switches to:
III Establishing Scene-Chloe
  • Reading Max's e-mail as interior monologue (fades into overlap with Max's words, Max's words fade-out
  • E-mail is invitation to hang out before spoken word event the three (she, Justin and Max) are going to
  • Chloe interrupted by co-worker
  • "So and so is here to see you."  Chloe begins speaking to incoming student about applying for student loans, fades out to
IV  Justin and Max
  • Riding bikes together through park (sounds of bikes, maybe some cool tunes laid over it)
  • Justin and Max pull off the trail and lock their bikes up, walk over to the Creek (Beargrass)
  • Sounds of running water, birds, etc.
  • Justin and Max smoke a joint (could be implied), relaxed conversation, venting about work/relationship bullshit, maybe Max and/or Justin and Chloe have a love-hate thing going on, audience gets their honest opinion of her (improv or scripted)
  • Justin notices something weird in the water, some kind of rusty, red run-off flowing through it
  • Max makes cynical remarks about a dying planet, corporations taking a dump in the creek, etc.
  • Justin takes video on his phone, narrates over top of it
 V  Chloe, Justin and Max
  •  Busy coffee shop or bar/lounge (sounds of background conversation, clank of dishes, etc.)
  • Conversation between the three about the weird run-off found in the creek
  • Justin shows Chloe the video
  • The three crack-wise about what it could be, Justin vows to upload it to Youtube
  • M.C. announces the beginning of the poetry jam, calls Chloe up for the open mic
  • Chloe goes up and reads a poem (original written for/by her)
  • As she finishes, the M.C. goes up to thank her ask for another round of applause, etc., fades out to
VI  Justin on Youtube
  • Justin's narration from earlier scene filming creek cuts out, Justin speaks directly into webcam 
 VII Justin and Max
  • Justin meets up with Max at coffee shop.  Max on his laptop.
  • Justin asks Max to pull up Youtube video.   
  • Max does, only static comes up 
  • Video removed "Violating terms of service?  What the fuck (or bleep, may be funnier for effect)?" 
  • Justin tries to pull up video on phone, sees it's been deleted
  • Max laughs, teases him gently (witty banter ensues, etc.--scripted or improv)
  • Justin convinces Max to go back out to the creek with him, take footage of his own phone, put it on Youtube to see what happens 
 VIII Outro
  • Justin and Max go to the creek
  • Contaminated area of creek blocked off, signs posted say "private property, construction", etc.
  • Obvious cliff-hanger is obvious 

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